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I wasn't going to post again because of the 1000-comments meme below but I forgot that I had meant to say this and no one's on anyway.
I need advice for TSPB/NLF/PI/Whatever-the-heck-the-title-is-this-week.
So, what I want to know is, in general, which of these would be more emotionally satisfying?
The original plot twist where Joseph thinks Zac is dead and none of the readers believe he is (mainly because they know me too well) and five chapters later Zac shows up, and not only do you have the horror of what's going on plotwise, but also, OMG Zac.
Or, I could actually explain what happened to Zac during that time, which means a few things.
1. Creepy Jen/Zac interaction.
2. Torture scenes.
3. We know, for a fact, that Joseph's whining and sobbing and general screw-losing is based on a lie, so we can feel even more sorry for the poor dear.
4. When Zac says "You don't know what I've been through!" we do know and so we can be all, "Awww, Joseph, be nice to the poor dear."
5. Also: cookies.
Mm, yes. Can't say more without giving away even more plotwise.
I need advice for TSPB/NLF/PI/Whatever-the-heck-the-title-is-this-week.
So, what I want to know is, in general, which of these would be more emotionally satisfying?
The original plot twist where Joseph thinks Zac is dead and none of the readers believe he is (mainly because they know me too well) and five chapters later Zac shows up, and not only do you have the horror of what's going on plotwise, but also, OMG Zac.
Or, I could actually explain what happened to Zac during that time, which means a few things.
1. Creepy Jen/Zac interaction.
2. Torture scenes.
3. We know, for a fact, that Joseph's whining and sobbing and general screw-losing is based on a lie, so we can feel even more sorry for the poor dear.
4. When Zac says "You don't know what I've been through!" we do know and so we can be all, "Awww, Joseph, be nice to the poor dear."
5. Also: cookies.
Mm, yes. Can't say more without giving away even more plotwise.
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More Cookies!?!?!?!please....
don't do it. we already have a vague mostly general idea of what is going on, and i'd rather not have you spoil some side evil plot bunnies, that you don't realize you have, but you do.
Oh no. it's attack of the evil plot bunnies.
Look...They are full of cookies.
Evil Plot Bunny: Cookies anyone?
Sc/Heather: Ooh. I'll take one.
Zac: Don't eat that.
Joseph: Oh come on. Just because we are allergic doesn't mean we are. No need to get your anti-anaphylactic shock medicine.
Sc/Heather: Your allergic to cookies?
....And so it goes on....
(this is only here to further aggravate Sc for her incompetent hair color.)
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Danny is being angsty and sad and he wants to kiss his girlfriend who is now thirty-some years older than he is. Stop it, Danny, you're too good for her.